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PVT's Working Class Experience's avatar

Well, this was rather brilliant. I enjoyed the way the global scope of the cosmic virus opening up perception to the blocktime universe was grounded against more personal and immediate concerns - love, scheming and domestic unhappiness. It's an astonishingly complex narrative for such a short piece, and all the more impressive for it. Would I be right in saying that it's slightly in conversation with my own short 'One Moment in Time' from awhile back, or is that just ego, talking? They deal with the same idea of an observer's blocktime filter getting removing, but what you hit on here is the human impact rather than the somewhat abstract philosophy of 'One Moment in Time'. In either case, your story is a marvellous piece that handles a fascinating and obtruse subject with delicacy, grace and clarity.

Henry Eng's avatar

Really liked the concept of Third Face. Also that opener is a very economical marriage portrait!

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